惜红衣 学作 张炎
惜红衣 学作 张炎
雾霁流云，风凉冷夜，露清霜洁。九九消寒，梅花待人贴，扬州景色，无赖忆、婵娟眉睫。佳绝。
剩了缺弦，挂楼头斜瞥。
伤情又惹，恼恨还添，青丝渐如雪。偷声减字，赋曲向谁说，角徵羽宫商调，韵律填词难叶。
唤那歌姬舞，还唱晓风残月。
张炎
两剪秋痕 平分水影 炯然冰洁 未识新愁 眉心倩人贴 无端醉里 添一笑 柔花盈睫 痴绝
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不解送情 倚银屏斜瞥
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长歌短舞 换羽移宫 飘飘步回雪 扶娇倚扇 欲把艳怀说 旧日杜郎重到 只虑空江桃叶
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但数峰犹在 如傍那家风月
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欣赏佳作！ {:208 (31):} {:8_381:}谢谢！
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